i went to a party with one of my friends
it was my friends brothers party i was so excited
i had a beer
i didn't know anybody there my fried ditch me at the party
but so i decided to have another beer.
i felt sick and went out side for air
i wnet in to the dark
i didn't talk to no one
but i heard some guy said " Hey Beautiful"
he was tall had brownish hair, nice eyes , and my heart was about to fall, i thought i was about to die
he said his name is andy
and he asked me if i want to dance
i said sure
he wrapped one arm around my waist and the other one around my butt
he tried to kiss me
but i back away
then i felt a little dizzy where i could smell beer and colongue
he asked me if i wanted to go somewhere else so we could get to kno each other a little better.
and be alone
i said sure but i was kind of scared and i thought how could a guy like him would want to know me?
then he started to kiss me again
it was cold outside
then i noticed we're on the ground
i tried to get him off of me but hewouldn't get off
he keep saying how beautiful i am
your going to like this
his hands are wandering all over my body
he's breahting so heavy
i want him to stop
i said andy stop
but he keep doing it
i didnt know what to do but scream
he was on me doing that to me
i was drunk didn't kno, i was crying
and he didn't get that
" I said no?:"
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i got raped
Written June 11th, 2006
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Hun, I am so sorry that this happened to you. I know how painfull it is to be raped. It is something that you will remember for the rest of your life and that will leave you a changed person. This poem is very emotional and true and painfull, I am sorry that this has happened to youm it shouldnt happen to anyone. If you ever want to talk i'm here. I think this Anydy guy deserves to suffer the pain that he made you go threw and one day he will suffer..*hugs*. stay strong and im sorry. -
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wow! this is such a sad poem. and that andy is erm a word ill refrain from using. this poem gives powerful imagery. keep it up! and chin up
Nikki
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wow, this piece of work is amazing, kind of scary and a good read all rolled into one! its a really moving poem and i like the rhyme at the end, it finishes it nicely. i hope you keep writing great stuff. i hope the poem wasnt real or ill squish that peep "andy".
keep up the good writing
tiani
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wow
wow, this piece of work is amazing, kind of scary and a good read all rolled into one! its a really moving poem and i like the rhyme at the end, it finishes it nicely. i hope you keep writing great stuff. i hope the poem wasnt real or ill squish that peep "andy".
keep up the good writing
tiani
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wow
wow, this piece of work is amazing, kind of scary and a good read all rolled into one! its a really moving poem and i like the rhyme at the end, it finishes it nicely. i hope you keep writing great stuff. i hope the poem wasnt real or ill squish that peep "andy".
keep up the good writing
tiani
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omg..im so sorry...i think that guy should be shot in the head..all guy like him .. grr
great write tho!! take care!!
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this is truily sad i have been there myself it really is traumatic experience. I actually cried when i read your poem to me back to a bad time and this is how i know this poem is very strong, and you can feel the pain, truily great work. -
thnks im glad u understand me i appreciate that. thnks again
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That's heartbreaking. I've been there, but it all got turned around to be my fault, him and his friends really messed with my head that night. People tell you drinking isn't cool but you really don't believe it until something really horrible happens to you. I was drunk, but what's really messed up is - I still remember every second of it, and it makes me feel sick, used, worthless, unappreciated, disrespected, pathetic. I really feel for you. You did a good job of putting your thoughts and feelings into words. Well done, I'm glad you've managed to write your emotions down because it can really be a help and make you feel better to let it all out. Keep positive. Good write.
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