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Recipe for Successful Lovemaking: A Reflection (prose) (ADULT)







 

Recipe for Successful Lovemaking: A Reflection (prose)

 



Skin to skin; no pinching, biting or slapping. Alone. Armed only with what you've learned. Clothed only in tenderness, affection & respect for fragility & strength. Honesty. Eyes warm with understanding of what it means to act with Love & Compassion in the face of Innocence & Experience. No fighting ~ but if you fight, make up. Immediately. Be kind to each other ~ you are uniquely creating a Memory. Realize that you are touching someone's Soul. Be gentle. Don't forget to laugh; just with each other,  not  at each other.




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Background courtesy of Danna Hobart



Written June 11th, 2006

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  • Jonathan ROBIN gold member
    February 8, 2007

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    Promise...sing

    This seems to be an introduction which on the one hand requires no "adult" rating ... those childlike are rarely adults as the latter are frequently childish in their interpersonal relationships (present company excepted. It is difficult to take a backseat view and at the same time remain committed as "interested party"


  • mjseattle silver member
    October 19, 2006
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    Hi, Wanda. I love this piece. I'm glad you're letting me know how you like your love making. You're a fiercely tender hearted woman. One of the things I love about you.
  • Colin OBrien
    June 20, 2006
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    Wonderful simply wonderful

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    Gotsta watch out for us librarians, Ryan...we're quiet...& stealthy...

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    No...no biting...However, gentle nibbling may be acceptable...

  • Oisin silver member
    June 12, 2006
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    No biting?

  • Ryan gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    Oh wow. How did you.. just what the... I'm speechless, dang woman! Talking about old fashion and we both have our two cents.. I'm just awe struck. peace be to you and yours Ms. Night

    -Ryan

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    Nahhh...you're much smarter, prettier & more compassionate than I, Nic... Thank you for the smiles, my Sister of the Soul...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...Love you, Woman... Vlindertjie

  • Nicolette gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    You should have been the social worker or the relationship counsellor rather than I, Vlindertjie! Simple, profound piece of prose you have written here. Made me think of the quote: If the marriage (relationship) is on the rocks, the rocks are usually in bed !! Lovely piece, my sister of the soul...indeed lovemaking comes from the surrendering of both body and soul (and skin...)!

    ~ Nicolette

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    Somethin' like that...but why put a time limit on it??? It's not like you could cook it for too long... Thanks, Serenahind...

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    Thank you, my sista...

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    Thanks, Moon Girl...

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    Reenie, what are you complainin' about, my Friend??? At least you're married...ya oughta try bein' single in this day & age, Lady... Sorry for the discomfort... Love ya right back...sweet dreamssssssssssss... Wanda

  • Lady Altheia silver member
    June 12, 2006
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    Very nice. So how long are we supposed to stir all those ingredients together? You forgot to put in how long it's supposed to bake. I figure 45mins to an hour would be enough. Don't you think?

  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    June 12, 2006
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    Although the theme is not different, this is a different way of expression your soul. Mix it and cook it....oh yessss...great write.

  • brown paper bag
    June 12, 2006
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    Wow this was such a unique look at love Wanda and I agree you are touching another's soul.Beautifully done my friend.

    love Moongirl

  • cherche -d -ame gold member
    June 12, 2006
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    and I used to call you friend And then you go and write someting like this (sighhhhhhhhhh). My post-op instructions explicitely say.......no bending, lifting, twisting , reaching...................and absolutely no fooling around until cleared by the doctor. I think I just might have to call him today Just kidding.....this write is *lovemaking at its gentlest and softest between two people who love each other and do not forget to have fun (the laughter)And being that I really do love you I forgive you and will go back tobed and call on the sandman for some beautiful dreams
    xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
    reenie

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading, Sunshinegf...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
  • Sunshinegf
    June 11, 2006
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    awesome i loved it was so romantic and impressive to read

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Thank you, Andy...

  • AndyHarper
    June 11, 2006
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    Nice little guide. I shall have to remember lol Very nicely written. Was drawn to the title. Was not disappointed in this beautiful piece. Keep up the wonderful work!


    ~Andy

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Thank you for your kind words, Hugh...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Thank you for your kind words, Gordie...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • hugh
    June 11, 2006
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    Very good

    lovely...the essence of love and sensuality.

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Oyyy veyyy... Uhhh huhhh...what you said, Scribe...every lil' letter...

  • kaibab silver member
    June 11, 2006
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    Make love like writing a poem...
    first line,get the attention
    of your lover
    if they are bored with the hook
    the words are worthless
    develop the idea slowly
    savor the fragrance of the sound
    swirl the motion in progress
    and touch each crevasse with essence
    and built the attention to touch
    as finger stroll
    and mark the climax
    in shivering progression.
  • Buchan
    June 11, 2006
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    excellent

    Wonderful in all aspects..Wisdom expressed. Love of the soul and care of actions. I agree. Thank you for writing such a sensible poem.Thank you.

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Adam Blatz...Indeed, Love is infinitely beautiful...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • SupaLovePoet
    June 11, 2006
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    I like this it is so beautiful the words just flow with a painting of beautiful love. Love is beautiful in any way and form.

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Don't we all??? Sorry. Can't resist a one~liner waitin' to happen... Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, BeautifulMemory...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Perhaps I'll consider a revision or a sequel. Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • mozarts funeral gold member
    June 11, 2006
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    Very nice, although I wish it was a little longer!
    inventive though.
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