I avoid you
with your "holier than thou" attitude.
Such a fake,
following up church
with drinks on the lake.
More curse
than actual words.
Look at all with utter disdain.
Backstabbing, lying, and cheating
and still, somehow, you're better than me?
They praise you lot
scorn us left.
Not realizing
you're the worst in all.
Dancing in church,
next stop: the streets.
Arrogant and rude
is what you strive to be.
You say " I am in the image of God"
I say you're a hypocrite
in the worst way.
What's bad?
You thinks it's okay!!
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aah... and the religous folk, not all, but most the ones i attended services with in the youth group and young adults.
Written June 12th, 2006
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Sad that those who act holier than thou are far from it. Great write.
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Arragant and rude
is what you strive to be.
You say " I am in the image of God"
I say your a hypocrite
in the worst way.
Arrogant and rude
I say you're a hypocrite
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It's too bad there are too many people in the world exactly like this. When my fiancee was the manager of a Tim Hortons he had problems with cashiers being theieves. You wanna know who was always stealing, the church girls he hired. It's just sad that people have become this way. Great Write. Good luck in the Contest.
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someone hateable to those not true to God also, it just convinces me that it is all a croak when i watch those people.
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i like this poem. it ryhmes and it makes perfect sense. there's one spelling error that i saw, but other than that, this is good work.
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Wow, your a smooth ryhmer! i love the image you create here, someone i could totally hate if i was true to god and someone played it as an image to which everyone loved. great hating and good work.
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