Sweet bliss,
I awake in your arms,
Softly your hand brushes the hair,
away from my face.
We can lie in till nine,
lazy Saturday mornings
A brand new day-
so young and light
the sun shines over the city
You smoke and I sing
your eyes are new to me...
They smile and,
laugh until ten.
Playing games beneath the blankets,
fingers entwined.
I needed this affection
I face this blue-skied day,
With the lingering smell of you.
Author notes
Written June 13th, 2006
A contest entry
- feelings by poet chick101.
300 points, ended June 13, 2006, 9 entries
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awsome! i loved the begining!! i could so picture the whole thing. i love it!!! good write!
-kimmie
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