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The Heartbeats of Her Silent Soul

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What hope there is, lies in the night where moontides mask the pain of light
illuminating misted tears with silver rays of clarity;

whispering a name, she hears the echo returning from the furthest shore-
the warmth she feels, the truth she shares rustling on the prairie floor.

Speaking to the dear departed in light and warmth, in truth and trust

we see her under shadow’s veil searching distant Heaven above.
She’ll turn and offer love if life should fall too hard on one of us-

one hand upon her cross to bear, the other taking up our loss
to stay the course of setting suns.

What solace she finds swells against the stubborn rocks of weary time,
weary time, weary time...

chained to cold and jagged peaks, she sees the warm and sandy shoals 
as they wash away, away.

 

Her dreams- the dancing dreams that curl around the edges of a soul

that slips beneath the light of day to stroll the shores of midnight glow;
suspended softly in these eyes, the visions of her lonely grace
steeps in the deepness of her sighs that long to feel the one embrace
that cannot be...

If asked of me, I’d light a fire, make certain of her gentle smile,
find the melody she seeks that plays the final destinies;
then sweep her spirit into my arms, and slowly dancing, slay the night
with heartbeats of her silent soul.

 

  

 


 

 


  












based on Moontides (lengthy) by Night Hope  

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Written June 14th, 2006

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  • wbiro gold member
    June 17, 2006
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    Thanks, Dr, just thanking you for the comment/poem you left a few days ago... I especially like the part about her laying her hand... as if she responded positively...!


  • Night Hope gold member
    June 15, 2006
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  • wbiro gold member
    June 15, 2006
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    It's OK, Wanda, I've saved all the versions... (just in case!) lol

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 15, 2006
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    Heyyy...no tinkerin', Poet...

  • wbiro gold member
    June 15, 2006
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    thanks, Nicolette, I just logged on to tinker with it! You may steal the background, for I borrowed it from Wanda who borrowed it herself!

  • Nicolette gold member
    June 15, 2006
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    This is a lovely piece of prose, Wayne - just loved the way you started it, but most of all I am amazed at how beautifully and with such depth you've painted Night Hope. There is a sense of timelessness here, of grace and a deeper understanding. Wanda truly deserves each and every heartbeat you've written here in words. The background is magical...think I'm going to steal it! I've just written a little piece about "red"...come to think of it, her night, her hope, her light, her moons are all beautiful and red!

    ~ Nicolette

  • weirdsis amz
    June 15, 2006
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    beautiful piece. The flow of the words was just brilliant. Your words created a wonderful atmosphere
    You have alot of talent. I love this piece.
    Keep writing
    Amz

  • dustookie2
    June 15, 2006
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    a pleasure for the reader

    your words set up the atmosphere and the words paint the picture for the reader to follow along the path you elected for us to go. a string of words simple but when under your construction and direction a very beautiful poem appears. Brilliant write as you do....the pleasure is mine for the reading
  • Alimental
    June 15, 2006
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    beautiful!...u paint a picture of her lonliness and in doing so you inform her of your company.

    "She dreams the dancing dreams that curl around the edges of her soul,
    that slip beneath the light of day and find the shoreline's midnight glow
    suspended softly in these eyes that hold a vision of her grace
    steeped in the deepness of her sighs that long to feel the one embrace
    that cannot be..."



  • June 15, 2006
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    This is so beautiful! I must say, my favourite part has to be this:
    "Speaking to the dear departed in light and warmth, in truth and trust,
    we see her under shadow’s veil searching distant Heaven above.
    She’ll turn and offer love"
    This whole piece just says so much.

    Wonderful job,
    Love and Peace,
    Blue.

  • nichtmich silver member
    June 15, 2006
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    Exquisite

    Lovely visuals indeed, but not half so lovely and loving as the poem itself. Had to read it twice just to savor the yearning and sometimes sad imagery suggested by your charming words. A rich enchanted tapestry of emotions, all I can say is thank you for sharing.
  • drhemantvinze
    June 15, 2006
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    This is an humble attempt to appreciate a wonderful poem!!


    REPOSE

    The light scatters,
    The sun sets,
    The purple twilight,
    Brings a calm delight

    Return home men weary,
    Attempting to find a moment merry,
    Kindle evening lights,
    That illuminate their dull homes' nights.

    With noiseless footsteps rises the moon
    To dispel from the earth despairs soon,
    Lays her gentle hand on the house,
    To impart a night's repose!



  • Gwenevere
    June 15, 2006
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    This poem to me is not about the background but the atmosphere it creates.Brilliantly moulded into a work of beauty.The moon is magical to me and has such healing powers.More than we realise.Thankyou for sharing this.You have calmed my day, Ros

  • Hollow Wanderer
    June 15, 2006
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    First impressions first. I really like the way this background matches so well the poem. They have a very complimentary effect so well done there. So often I find the backgrounds don't support or compliment the content placed on top of them but you've done a beautiful job with that. It calls me into the proper humors. The mauve suggesting sanguine and the black calling forth the melancholic. Your choice of words is also masterful with such soothing sounds and bittersweet imagery. The whole construct touches my soul and brings me to a time in my memory when I felt very similar. You've done very well indeed. You've communicated. All too often poetry is very personal and the feeling gets lost or too encrypted in the meter or rhyme. Thank you for sharing this with us.

    ~Hollow Wanderer~
  • Azul Mariposa
    June 15, 2006
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    This is a beautifully melencholy read.......imagery was amazing and you did very well with creating the tension and release with your words........awsome job.
  • Sunshinegf
    June 15, 2006
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    awesome work on this love poem i enjoyed reading it

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 15, 2006
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    To luvdrkchocolate: Wayne wrote this for me, Poet... Wayne, I added a link to your poem on mine, in the author's comments...Thank you again, my Friend... Wanda

  • PrincessTigris
    June 15, 2006
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    OOO...that was a completely enchanting piece. I drifted away on your gentle imagery...it was like being near the sea right before a storm...consumed by the crashing waves and the overwhelming feelings it invokes.
    I especially loved the second stanza...what beauty! what awe! what mystery you approach!
    You amaze me again and again!
    Princess

  • wbiro gold member
    June 15, 2006
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    thanks, poet on skies- the real 'scheme' here is the tension and release of each line, words ending in consonants creating the building tension, and words ending in vowels offering the release... kind of like guy/girl names, come to think of it!

  • wbiro gold member
    June 14, 2006
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    an appluse for finally revealing to me that you have a name, asp! (and I humbly thank you for the tribute... and as for gravel, it is the foundation for roads that beckon...!)

  • wbiro gold member
    June 14, 2006
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    I think you've summed it up well, lover of dark chocolate! A bravo to you!
  • luvdrkchocolate
    June 14, 2006
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    What a beautiful background! I love it! Such a enticing shade of red! And your poem was just as lovely! The words you used were very lovely too and I enjoyed reading them very much. It sounds like whomever you were talking about is a very wonderful person who's going through a rough patch. And you seem like you really sympathsize with her and appreciate the wonderful person she is. So you're hoping to encourage her to push past it. Lestways, that's the feeling that I get when I was reading your work. And even if I'm wrong I think that was a great sentiment to read in it. But I think you did well to express yourself here. So thanks for featuring this so that we all had a chance to share your words and feelings with you today!
  • The True Asp
    June 14, 2006
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    OMG

    Silent Observer to WBiro
    The whine of winds across your soul
    Leaves little hope for useless man
    For an architect of sweet emotions
    Does xray the structure deep within
    Finding no fault, does build his case
    One word at a time, welding it
    with friendship's steel hasps
    Creating what others will debate but eons
    No lesser being of the order
    Who are more than men, less than angels
    And to whom we must doff our toques
    Succumbing to the power of these stones
    And know we be but poetic gravel
    Hugs Ann

    Edited on Jun 14, 6:03 p.m. because ''.

  • Sabindi
    June 14, 2006
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    Outstanding

    Stunningly superb in every way imaginable. Your words are supreme, the flow so perfect and the images vivid and inspiring. You rock!!! Hugs, sunny smiles and lotsa love. Marilyn

  • SimpleSarcasm
    June 14, 2006
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    What a powerful ending. This reads more like prose (to me any way). I like the gentleness of the piece. What I find amazing is that one of the comments was longer than the prose Still, that doesn't take away my enjoyment of reading this piece.
  • poet on skis
    June 14, 2006
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    Wow this has such a gut twisting pain to it and yet some strange stillness. I like the atmospher you created. The rhyme you put into it is just enough to let it have rhyme but not enough for me to see a real rhyme scheme so i am wondering why you bothered with it. However it did lead to a very nice read. nicely done.
  • Daydream Believer
    June 14, 2006
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    Incredible

    Simply Amazing!
  • meaningfull
    June 14, 2006
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    This is beautifull and the background goes perfectly. I love the meaning of these words.
  • exoticbeaches
    June 14, 2006
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    lovely write.

  • kaibab silver member
    June 14, 2006
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    They are stubbsorn, the rocks of time,
    but my canyon still moves
    and wind and water carve
    and crave...the most beautiful walls,
    to canvas poetraits of soul's won
    in the battle against ugly sounds
    pretending to be words
    in poison spilling thought the veins
    enchanted by destruction and ingorance.

  • Whispering Pain
    June 14, 2006
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    this is a really good poem and it has an excellant title to it i liked it a lot it was so very beautiful and i also like the background you gave it it gives the poem a nice touch really lovely good poem

  • -Ang-
    June 14, 2006
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    amasingly written with beautiful sentiment and all that romatic stuff, reading this made me all warm and fuzzy inside

    ang

  • Night Hope gold member
    June 14, 2006
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    Wayne, this is sooo lovely, my Friend...Exquisite language & sentiments, Poet...You honor me completely with this penning...You are such a Romantic...but don't worry; I won't tell... Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful, flattering piece of poetry, Wayne...It's obvious that you put a lot of thought & even more Heart into its creation... Wanda
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