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Eyes

In the darkness
I find my eyes
Cultured by wind chimes
And textured lines

Awakening slowly
I see the sound
Of passing trains
And chains unbound

Ever changing
The melody
Invades the serene
Enforces the parody
Of wandering dreams

Cultivating light
Through minds impression
Rejecting the stigma
Said past regression

Left bailing out the rivers
That flood my head
And brandishing scars
From wounds unshed

Yet somehow to find
The drifter’s embrace
And blindly I follow
His hidden chase

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Written June 15th, 2006

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  • Kylaya Halon
    June 16, 2006
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    omg! this was beautiful. i loved the way you inserted the given line. keep up the great work...sorry awesome work.
    -Des2000