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Rest In Peace

Lonely figures gather round
To watch the swallowed mind of death
Spewing sonnets from its crater
An effortless tease of withered tones

Crystal drops from hate and blood
Black clad demons of rejected tape
Innocence dances on the graves
'Rest In Peace' by versace fashion

Bloody shawls protect the widows
Through moans of loss and revelation
Raining down a canvas scream
Perfected art of sorrows pride

Words engraved on angels wings
A service for a servants peace
And in this scene a breeze cuts dry
The only thing real in these lies

Author notes

Is this how we will all go? If this is a celebration of the life we led - we live very boring lives.

Written June 15th, 2006

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  • Angel Full Of Hurt
    June 23, 2006
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    incredible piece of work Coral!

    Crystal drops from hate and blood
    Black clad demons of rejected tape
    Innocence dances on the graves
    'Rest In Peace' by versace fashion


    Love this part, love the whole piece because it is just lovely to read!

  • June 15, 2006
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    A great flow, a touching poem, and some really great points! I love the meaning in this poem, and the depth! Thank you so much for entering my contest, and keep the ink flowing! Your talent shines strong.