You live within my dream and fantasy world
amongst the flowers and trees
Whispering deep in the forest with me
Reaching the destiny of love pure and free
That day you gentle venture in my sacred land
Intoxicated, from sip of lovers drink, from my hand
Getting infected, with the touch of my magic here
Under the mystical sky and pine fresh air
Hunting into my world and give me your trust
I bind you, in my fantasy world of Lust
For here you will be till eternity
Showers, raining love to reach reality
I dwell within the mysteries
a realm of knowledge and peace
Reflecting in the sparkling pond
With stolen kisses here, where you and I bond
Author notes
Written June 16th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- - The Fantasy contest - by Aureola.
300 points, ended September 10, 2006, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Hey!!! Thanks for entering my contest! What a prettily penned poem. The picture suits it well. I especially liked the last line. I got lost in your realm of fantasy! That's how it's supposed to be
Great write, good luck and keep it up,
♥ Aureola -
Sensational write. I enjoyed this poem so much. Thank you for entering it into my contest, and best of luck.
-Jade -
Wonderful poem. So descriptive. The imagery is wonderful. Beautiful photo also. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with all of us here at AP. Keep up the great writes. Good luck in the contest. ttyl Tali
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awesome!
this is beautiful, i love the way you wrote it, and i absolutely love the picture you chose for it. keep on writing!
♥ infamous sorrows -
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for your visit and honest feedback i am so delighted you enjoy
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chardonnay for your visit and honest feedback i am so delighted you enjoy
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i love this poem you are such a good poet *
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i love the way you have written about nature and the way that you include yourself in nature aswell.
keep up the good work.
love chardonnay -
This is beautiful. I love it. You have an amazing vocabulary, and a vivid imagination. Very nicely done, really great job. Good luck in the contest.
<3 Catherine -
Not really what i would like to read yet it took me there!!
nice work mate =)
xxx -
Excellent poem
What a wonderful love poem, I really loved the depth and the creativity that you put into it. It flowed so nice, just a wonderful write!!! -
PrabhuDayal Khattar many thanks for your visit and honest feedback i am so delighted you enjoy
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corrupt angel many thanks for your visit and honest feedback i am so delighted you enjoy
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"I dwell within the mysteries
a realm of knowledge and peace
Reflecting in the sparkling pond
With stolen kisses here, where you and I bond"
Wow! I'm impressed. This was so beautiful and so vivid! Great write and good luck!!
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very good
a beautifull write my friend thank you for sharing this with us and keep up the good work
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Hunting into my world and give my your trust
I bind you, in my fantasy world of Lust
For here you will be till eternity
Showers, raining love to reach reality
A great expression from the depth of a heart here ..
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This is beautifully written, emotion is expressed well and the imagary is spectacular!
The last line i loved the most -
With stolen kisses here, where you and I bond
Keep it up!
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many thanks
for you generous applaud and honest feedback
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I like this. It's good. The imagery is great and the flow of it is perfect for the poem. the ryhming is good but sometimes it seems abit forced. Sorry! I especially like the lines:
"Hunting into my world and give my your trust
I bind you, in my fantasy world of Lust"
They just stand out I don't know why. Great poem though.Keep writing!!!
And in reference to your Im to me I always comment on the poems I read.
~Marie lee
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Really strong poem!
i feel i connected with it -
very nice, got me right here (pointing to my heart)
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