A great grizzly bear standing so very high,
awoken from his slumber a full season long.
Seeing smokey rings, and smelling a funny smell
made by smelly campers singing a silly song.
The great groggy grizzly has a giant hunger
as he smells the camp's food and draws nigh
the campers turn, hearing the bear, and see.
A great grizzly bear standing so very high.
Waddling into camp comes the great grizzly.
guided by his nose, the meat, and the song,
the campers fear the bear, and see he has
awoken from his slumber a full season long.
Campers run and scream from the grizzly bear
but all the bear wants is something to quell
his great hunger, even if he his only hope is
seeing smokey rings, and smelling a funny smell.
All he can get is a bowl full of smoking grass
which doesn't do much to help his hunger along.
But his head was spinning from this green weed
made by smelly campers singing a silly song.
A great grizzly bear standing so very high,
awoken from his slumber a full season long.
Seeing smokey rings, and smelling a funny smell
made by smelly campers singing a silly song.
Author notes
A laurenova, which is a form created by all4luv.
In this, the bear is looking at the campsite, and he enters it, and there, he encounters a bowl of weed being cooked by some campers.. Imagine a stoned bear... lol.
Written June 18th, 2006
A contest entry
- What's he looking at {All Ages} by rufina caraid.
300 points, ended June 19, 2006, 10 entries
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Comments
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a stoned bear ,inventive
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The imagination runs wild with this one as did the Bear no doubt after he'd finished the contents of the bowl.
Thanks for your entry
Von -
well penned
i liked how you focus on your bear
brilliant piece
good luck
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