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The Devil Is Laughing

Why does it feel like the devil is laughing
When he licks at my sore wounds?
Even your God takes his dear time
To save my surrendered soul
Everyone has left me and gone
There is no time for a smile
There is no time for a sigh.
Why is the devil laughing?
Is it because I've managed to live?
Lived spells DEVIL
Live spells EVIL
But what does my name spell?
I wish it could spell out laughter
Tears
Regret
Hearts
Torn
Life Gone

(MY name spells none)

(My name creates no word)

Is the Devil still laughing at me now?

Author notes

I really dont know how this came up...I dont like it too much though...
Written June 19th, 2006

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  • BleedingKittii
    December 14, 2007
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    It's an interesting concept. I liked the slight wordplay and the last couple lines. I like it.