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Ardy Conlon

You walked into my life with a laugh and a joke.
with your personally, it was hard to cope.
you never liked me at the start, you thought I would bad
for you brother, in the end you wern't bothered.
we soon grew close, your feelings for me soon changed,
you thought of me like a sister.

You where the life and soul of a party, never a
dull moment where ever you were.
I don't know why you where took, I cant explain,
all I know is, that it was wrong.
Our bereavement will never go away, as you
will always be a part of our life's.

You walked out of my life with saddness and a tear.

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Written June 20th, 2006

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  • firechilde
    March 17, 2007

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    oh wow

    This is so incredibly sad.It takes such a long time to build up trust and caring.Then to have a good friend,taken away...that is not fair.Im sorry for your pain.

  • Eusebius
    July 15, 2006
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    Bravo!

    Very touching and poignant piece of poetry ! Excellent!