The queen of dreams, on citrine wings
With snow white doves to fly ahead,
They play their game of rainbow rings
With blue bell buds and roses red.
That's an enchanting garden there
Beyond the grove, behind tall trees,
Where seducing scents fill the air,
Fairies come down to rest with ease.
She plays her game, the whole day long
Tender feet, drawing shapes on sands
Chasing butterflies, she sings her song
Of unheard tales in unknown lands.
When the sapphire curtains dance,
To the moving wind's lovely tune,
The painted flowers, steal a glance
To watch this lady chase her boon.
Wild ecstasies in a high leap
Sun and snow, together they shine,
And sweet rainbow would always peep,
Secrets hide in this holy shrine.
When golden daylight bids adieu
She is seen alone in the isles,
Forever young, forever new
She sighs and shines, in shyness smiles.
Author notes
Written June 20th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Fantasy Imagination and Research by masterblaster.
300 points, ended June 21, 2006, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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A beautiful background. The poem is so beautiful. It rhymed good and it flows as usuall.
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nature's wonder gets added beauty with your words....
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awsome
Hey great poem beautifully written and your choice of words were supurb it's sure to tickle the noses of many poets keep it up -
Perfect Pleasure!
Wow! We at ap be not worthy of such finely written poetry.
((((( Applause ))))) I shall return to do it right. In fact, check your fav list
Keep it up
Tommy -
This is more than just a great flow. It has charisma and charm to the ceiling. It's nice to get that fuzzy warm feeling while reading someone's work. Nice job here. Great imagination.
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Excellent
Hi:
I just love the beautiful poem you have written. It is beautifully penned. Keep writing good works. Take care of you.
Katie Lazette -
Hi Raspberry, your fantasy writes are always such a joy to read, you should put a collection together, they would make a super childrens book, lovely poem, Di
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raspberry there is little i can say about this piece that i have not said before about your work. The Passion and imagination you always manage to display in your work is something the reader can see and feel for themselves. One always walks with you on your journeys into worlds of fantasy Wonderful
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wow this is a really peaceful and calm poem. It really brings you to a place of happiness, excitment and mystery. I really enjoyed the readers connection with this poem and it's words as well as the 'free' ryhming. It really added a lot of originality. Have an awesome day and never stop writing.
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awh this was beautiful; it had a really magical feel to it ... yo ucould just almost see the faeires dancing and prancing in the air ... really nice job on this, i thoroughly enjoyed reading it :0
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This is awesome... It's all "enchanting" and fantasyish!!! YOu did a great job on this one!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
That was totally terrif. great job. I like to read poems like these from poets like you. Keep up the great work.
your friend,
Ace♠ -
wow this poem is so good you have such a good talent there never ever let it go to waste well done!
luv DevilishEyesxxx -
what a magical place to be ,and awsome meadow gareden, very lovely great imagery vivid scenes of pure content ment wonderful writing
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very nicely penned
ah i think i would like to live here for awhile.
Your paint the picture in my mind the fantasy lives.....nice flow and feel with good rhyme but then it is what i would expect of your write. a pleasure to read with great imagery and descriptive emotions so the reader has a feel good wanna go there moment. One damn fine write and such a pleasure to read. Your words support the artwork perfectly good luck in the contest.
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EEEXXXCCCEEELLLEEENNNTTT!!!
HEYY!! I LOVE YOUR AP NAME... ANYWAY I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS POEM.. AND THE PICTURE IS SOOOOOO WONDERFUL!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK GIRL! 
- ShamaiL
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exquisite!
That is awesome!.. good poem for a tree-hugger like me.. I love the rhyme scheme and everything else along with it.. dazzling work! -
This is a beautiful poem.....so light and full of joy, wonderful work.
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