Day light's gift
To the world in sleep,
A gentle kiss on fresh green leaves
They drip, dribble
Crystal droplets of unique beauty..
Author notes
Written June 21st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- DEW by Melodies.
550 points, ended September 18, 2007, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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wow!
I could actually see a dew drop and the imagery was beautiful!
I love how you describe it as "daylight's gift". Different from the usual " droplets from way above".
nice picture too.
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UUUmmmmm!!! Delicious penning
So fresh and beautiful, like green happiness!
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excellent~
Just beautiful sweetie....
Love this and I love that pic too...
I am trying to get my muse to pen a poem for this contest....but so many good ones here...me thinks I might out numbered here
Best of luck in the contest...
I posted a new one too do hope you drop by and visit me
Hugs
Susan~~~
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WoNdErFuL PoEm!!!
Raspberry!
This is absolutely beautiful! Oh if only I could applaud, I would! What a poetic wonder you are! Well, I made good on my word but I find more pleasure this time.
Keep writing and take care. I'll return again to this so I can really leave my mark. Wonderful Poem!
Tommy -
Very nicely done. Nice imagery to match the picture. I like the easy of it and the flow.
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Good Luck!
awwww loved it huney great job! -
This is absolutely lovely! The imagery is vivid...and astounding...the picture is definitely captured within your wonderful work.
Liz -
Thankyou Ur kind words r much appreciated.
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a masterpiece of incredible beauty, majesty and magic.
so uplifting and peace-inspiring, so incredible ...
just ...
thank you.
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WOW... This is awesome dear cousin!!! You did a great job on this!!! The picture is beautiful too!!! Good luck in the contest!!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
The mystery of the dewdrop , how each is a little crystal ball.
Lovely feeling in the write , morning's gift.
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Thanks for the comment
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This too is beautiful--I almost wrote about dew drops too, I'm glad I didn't now as it would have been hard to compare with your excellent write. very nicely done! good luck in the contest.
Shaz xx
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