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Tiny Giggles



Tiny giggles
echo
yesterday's scene
three snuggled atop
blankets
in the shade
fantasies read aloud
dancing
on day's breeze
Tiny giggles
melt
Mom's tender heart

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Written June 21st, 2006

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  • FindingFate
    June 22, 2006
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    What a wonderful thing to be considered a favorite! I have four and to hear them giggle brings me so much joy it is unreal. You have brought me joy as well. I have added you to my favorites and hopefully will be back soon to read more of your amazing talent...Trina

  • Lavender Butterfly gold member
    June 21, 2006
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    This is totally amazing, almost as shame that it isn't an inaminate object. Such a fabulous write however, truly expressive and heart warming... x LB

  • JeannieD Hunter silver member
    June 21, 2006
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    Wow this is brilliant. So touching and heartfelt. Great job and wonderful message. Good luck in the contest. Jeannie D Hunter

  • Toni A Christman
    June 21, 2006
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    Wow, Razzberry, this is so darling. I love the way you constructed it, too. The rhythm was sort of rocking, like a mother's rocking chair. I guess we never outgrow liking that feeling. Best luck in the contest! Toni