Furry paws dangled
by
dainty fingertips
two sipped tea
from
imagination's cup
whispered secrets
tickled
cotton filled ears
Softly
tucked away
in
memories'
treasure chest
a
teddy bear
dreams
alone
Author notes
Written June 23rd, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- What's in the basket...? by Lavender Butterfly.
300 points, ended June 23, 2006, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by Midnight-x-Rose.
3000 points, ended August 26, 1937 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Congrats! This is a beautiful piece! It made me smile with memories!
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Razzberry, Congrats. on the Gold trophy with a Teddy Bear's picnic? No. You are more subtle than that, my friend. Lyndon.
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Wow... that's awesome! Very delightfully crafted with soft words. Congrats on the well deserved Gold! This was truly a pleasure to read.
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This is just delightful! You must have been peeking in the basket...LOL...although there is a chance that you are the one who put the goodies in the basket. That must be why you know so well what is there! I see a couple of typos, but otherwise, I think this one is just great. It's a wonderful blend of adult insight and children's imagination! I see the contest is still in judging, so best of luck! Toni
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PS memories' should be memory's
rose
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Fury (first word) should be furry. But otherwise, this was a lovely write, smacking of childhood innocence and fun. Good luck in the contest.
rose
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I love her contests and I think this will be the gold. Someone will have to come up with near perfect to beat it...Best of luck hon...Trina
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You truly are amazing Bonnie! I am so glad that I have come across you in this life. Surely God has blessed me. This is a wonderful write. I am in envy of your talent my dear...
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OMG ~ This is amazing. I absolutely love it!!! Fabulous write. Thank you so much for this entry and good luck in my contest... x LB
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