The poem was deleted from the contest by mistake;
I didn't want to lose all of my lovely comments.
The new posting is at this link:
www.allpoetry.com/poem/2096912
Author notes
Picture credit: "The Garden of Hope" by Thomas Kincade
Background courtesy of Danna Hobart
Written June 26th, 2006
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Thank you for reading & for your gracious words, my Friend...I'm pleased you enjoyed my work...Indeed, I try to find Beauty everywhere I look; I usually succeed...Be well, Poet...
Wanda
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This is a wonderful pice Wanda and it flows so beautifully. It suits the picture chosen beautifully as well and exposes your beautiful and caring soul. You always manage to capture beauty and I love reading Your work for exactly that reason. Thank you for sharing your lovely spirit with us through your work.
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Thank you for your kind words, Terry....I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you, Rich...I added one of my favorite pictures, Scribe...I'm glad you liked it, my Friend...Happiness always lingers, for those who know it's infinite worth... Wanda
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Excellent
This is a very well written and beautifull write . Very passionate and romantic. Best of luck to you in the contest and keep up the fantastic work .
Cheers
Terry -
This is such a lovely piece...and a bit happiness lingering...
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Thank you for your kind words, Adam...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you, Azul Mariposa...I'm glad you enjoyed it...Actually, it's not technically a collaboration, even though it's listed as such; the concept of the contest is working with a partner; the one that usually writes rhymes has to write a free verse poem & the one that usually writes free verse has to write a rhyme...the idea is, our partner has to ok our writes before we post them & offer any suggestions for improvements...but we write them ourselves to begin with...suseann is a consummate professional; her penning didn't require any changes, in my humble estimation...unfortunately, she felt the same way about my rhyme...
I didn't want suseann takin' the blame for this one...
Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Your collab proved to bring forth a truly beautiful write. Fantastic poem here you two......I loved reading every line of it, it has such grace and ease as the words flow so perfectly.
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very good pem just like alwys and i always find them to be great have a great summer Adam
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Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Trina...I'm pleased you enjoyed it, Lady...Actually, it's not technically a collaboration, even though it's listed as such; the concept of the contest is working with a partner; the one that usually writes rhymes has to write a free verse poem & the only that usually writes free verse has to write a rhyme...the idea is, our partner has to ok our writes before we post them & offer any suggestions for improvements...but we write them ourselves to begin with...suseann is a consummate professional; this penning didn't require any changes, in my humble estimation...unfortunately, she felt the same way about my rhyme... Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Yvonne...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Quill...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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You sure, Sweetie??? Thank ya, suse...I appreciate ya, my Friend... Wander
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Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Colin...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...Be well, Poet... Wanda
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Well sweet Wanda rhyme or free verse your writes are exquisite. I love this!!! Best of luck to you and your collab partner. The backround is lovely as well...Trina
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this was awesome to read my dear sweet friend.
Yvonne
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nice write
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My buddy! I wouldn't change a line.You've done quite well.And used my favorite flower in the process.You're better at the five line rhymed verse then this rhymer.I love it.~~Suseann
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Very nicely done
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