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mi grate grate grandfather had a coin  from vetnam but he died
mi grand father had coin from vetnam but he died
dad had a coin from vetnam but he died
i hav a coin from vetnam

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Written June 28th, 2006

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  • AshliiAsphyxiation
    January 8, 2007

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    confused

    i like the idea you had going with this. but the stanza's are all over the place. And even though its ment to have it trail off, to uncertanty, i feel as if your last line could have a bit more for example "i have a coin from vietnam. we all know whats to happen" because alas, not many people are smart and know you are meaning that you too , shall die.

  • shadowofdark
    June 29, 2006
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    good point

    it waz random to the point of wat iz phisicly realy that side of thr family iz y im sicisidle and in my eyes thay are alredy dead as am i
    Edited on Jun 29, 2:26 because ''.

  • Jesii
    June 28, 2006
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    Thats very interesting. lol. For something that isn't true. Its amazing to see how your mind could just randomly think of that. Or, was it random at all?
    .jes.