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My Failures

A song of grey
Waiting to feel again
Broken since last May
Is there something wrong with me..or the men?

A dance of pain
Alone on the street
in the rain
We will never meet.

A instrument of pain
Will I ever be the same?
Is there no feelings to wane?
A life nothing, but shame.

A night of tears
with acceptance of all I am.
Still looking down seeing no leers,
still believing all relationships a sham.

Is this all I am?
A creature such a failure, Heaven scorns and laughs.

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Written June 29th, 2006

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  • everybodys-fool
    June 29, 2006
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    Thanks for entering my contest =)

    I love the way this poem flows, sometimes with rhyming poems they don't sound right, they sound a bit forced, but this didnt. You could really feel your emotions.

    Well done....and good luck! xxx