such a fool,
for letting you go,
i had the best
so caring, so loving
yet i let my own problems
let you go
such an idiot,
i can't figure out my own problems
and then they screw things up
why can't i be happy
two of the most caring guys
gone,
because of me
cause i can't figure out what i want
cause i can't figure out why
ever relationship doesn't fill the gap
the whole,
i want the love
but its not enough
why????
i need to figure that out
then maybe i can stop hurting everyone
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im an idiot!!!!!
Written June 30th, 2006
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Nicely written poem, I can feel the pain and the depth of emotion in it.
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Beth you are soo no idiot! I'm so gld I was their to at least try and help. You two are so wo nderfull together
Stay strong and be happy. Like I told tom i'm their for the both of you. I'm so glad you two are happy again. Very good write keep it up(lol not the way this one was though I cant stand seeing you upset) Talk to you soon enough!
~Aeris~
Edited on Jul 01, 1:39 p.m. because ''.
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Lol thats good! very happy lol anyways let me know how things go k?!
xoxoxo
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Loved the comments and your poem. The poem was so poigant and sad than I read the comments-it had me laughing here at my desk. Good Job. RobinRae.
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actually lol things worked out like 10 minutes after i wrote this so everything fine
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uh oh..... we need to talk.Whats up?! hope we can talk later, but for right now you got me all the way k?!! awesome poem though lol
xoxo
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Your not an idiot! I love you, but you need to find out what's wroung. You said, "The two most caring guy's are gone" Are you talking about Timmy? Becuas if your blaming your self for Timmy, don't! Timmy's my falt, not your, and you know that! God I love you Elizabeth, I can't wait for you to feel the same. But no matter how long it take's I'll be waiting.
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