A smile so magical, so sweet,
Never a painting to be framed,
For I couldn't see your face,
With my eyes closed, a stranger,
You were after all.
A voice, so perfectly feminine,
Never a song to be sung,
For I couldn't hear you,
With my eyes open, a stranger,
Weren't you after all?
A presence, so soothing,
Never a feeling to be described,
For I couldn't express,
With words spoken, a stranger,
Were you after all?
A thought, so perpetual,
Never to be penned down,
For I couldn't remember,
The beginning, the end, a stranger,
You couldn't be after all.
A touch, so alien,
Never to be experienced,
For I always fear,
Too electric it might be, a stranger,
You never were to me, after all.
Author notes
Can you write anything at all close to what I've written? Have you ever felt anything out of the world? Have you ever found youself unexplainable to yourself? Have you felt ultimate bliss? If you can answer 'Yes' to any one of those questions, then.......ignore the question! 
K seriously... there are these emotions that you feel only when you are in love...with a stranger... That must be reason enough to fall in love.. Forget about the "getting hurt" part.. It happens if the love you've found isn't your "True" love.. so keep searching.. And then call me up and take my address so that you can deliver the WHEELS!
Written July 1st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Make me Believe in LOVE !!! (Contest!) by lyrical-rebel.
350 points, ended July 11, 2006, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Angel! Wwwwwwwhoa! Thats so damn sweet of u! God I feel like I'm the King of the world after reading that awesome comment of yours! Love ya for that! Rock on! I love reading your stuff too. I've told u so before!
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Oh Fairymother! I was never notified that you Congratulated me for this one! Damn those responsible for this mess! Thanku so much for your wishes! Rock on!
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Oh my God! You are a fucking awesome writer man!! I AM SPEACHLESS! I mean what can I say, you said it all... Damn you're good! I'm going to keep reading your stuff dude! well.. I guess that's it man... oh, and keep up the good work yo! I know you will
See ya later!
-Angel-
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HEEEEEEEEEY! CONGRATULATIONS! Dumbkiwaniwinkydodo, you are the bestest!
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Oh Yeah! I wrote two entries for this contest... Too tempting ain't it?
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ooooooooooooooh, this is why I thought I already read your poem for this contest, you wrote another! heehee...
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Sue! Thanks for the comment! This piece of work...I owe it to you..every word of it! Thanks for the inspiration, the contest and the support! Couldn't ask more from a sister.. Love ya lots! Thanks again!
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Kaialise....Thanks a ton for your thoughtful comment! And you already believe in love don't you? Your Author's page says you're in love! So you needn't worry about answering my question..You rock!
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I believe ma boi i BELIEVE....!!!!! this is brilliant!... im so glad you entered this... i see different emotions.. afraid to open your eyes.. if open.. not sure of what you see... to feel something.. but not be able to understand... if able to understand... not able to describe... I love this...!!!
Good job..!
Sue!----->
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I fully agree with sunshinegirl. This was a great poem that makes you think..i love it but i'm not sure if i have an answer to your question.
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hahaha... feel free to let me know if you have any other new poems. I am new here and there is so much to explore!
Write on! Kimberly G.
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Kimberly! Thanks a ton for your comment! So sweet of you to respond to my silly IM asking you to read my poem... You're awesome! Thanks again!
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sunshinegirl! whoa! that is one awesomely encouraging comment! Thanks a lotttttt! And congrats that your manuscript was picked up by a publisher.. Way to go!
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Awesome poem! So true, the feelings we have when in love with a stranger are a great experience, not to be shunned even if that love doesn't last forever! Kimberly G.
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don't know if the poem or the comment is better said! this is amazing! keep that pen flowing, and i will keep reading! great piece!
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