I love you so much,
Yet you still dont know how much you have changed my world.
I'd wait a life time for you,
As long as you say that you will be mine in time.
And if you refused me then i will just die
Cuz you are everything in my life in which i live to inpress
Just to have a moment with you haolding me close
Would set my heart to skip a beat.
There is only one person that this poem is for
And that noone will know who that person is
Then the poem could be for you or for him.
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only for the one
Written July 4th, 2006
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love the love poems and this is a good one even though its just for the one thats what it is all about just the one nice write...
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ahhhhh...been there done that...i think that we all can relate to this poem...it is short and quite powerful...funny thing about love though...it is as fickle as a child sometimes...often we think we have found that one special someone...that one we are meant to be with...but then just like the wind the feelings pass...and then we think we are just lost souls...we often really wish we could just curl up and die...and then...where there is someone new and the cycle just repeats itself... hopefully in time you find that special someone...but for some of us it turns into a never ending search... ok enough ranting.... i did quite enjoy your poem and it is a piece definitely worthy of applaud...keep writing and keep sharing
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Great job. Very interesting ending, but the whole thing was amazing. I definitely know how you feel with this. My ex (who today said that maybe we should get back together), meant so much to me. I could tell him anything about myself, even the horrible stuff (the cutting, bulimia, and drugs), and it still didn't scare him away, but I really don't think he knew how much all that meant to me. So I definitely understand how you feel. Great write, keep up the amazing work.
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Once again short and sweet and still speaking volumes of love's sentiments and emotions. True feelings of love need not long drawn out expressions. A wonderfully lovely piece that wraps the reader in a blanket of warm love. Bravo!
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Wow! This is really good! But yet again, those pesky typos, line 6 'inpress' to 'impress' and line 7 'haolding' to 'holding' try spell check, that may help. I really liked this one, alot! Keep that pen flowing.
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This is an amazing write. it has a really nice feel to it makes me feel all lovey hehe. great write
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noone needs to understand who that special one is, it is who ever you want that one to be
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Stefy this is just a amzing poem, but who is this one. Talk to you soon i hope.
xx Shadow xx
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