No more than just a girl,
If only you were,
Love you, I would have,
With no feelings of guilt.
A priestess you were too,
In a life that is past you,
Down the well, to a land so ancient,
Into the hands of Inu Yasha, you fell.
Half-demon, yet so noble,
Half-human, yet so fierce,
Wielding the Tetsusaiga,
A better groom, he was.
There you were, pretty and tall,
So chic, in a mini skirt,
With a voice so lovely,
Say 'sit' and I too would have...obeyed!
Yet, respect for Inu Yasha,
I believed I owed. A demon,
Burdened by not just the sword,
But more so by responsibility.
Like no other, he truly
Deserved you, desired you.
Honour him I could,
To stop loving you,
I couldn't.... Kagome.
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9 hours for judging... So I was in a hurry to get it done.. Ok..So..If you aren't already laughing at me.. then I think you didn't understand the poem...Its like this.. Kagome is the female lead in Inu Yasha.And no Anime artist hath created a girl so pretty as her.. So I did fall in love with her..but kinda was fighting with my conscience. After all she was Inu Yasha's girl.. And he truly deserved her.. So though I respected and believed Inu Yasha to be somebody with honour, and tried to keep my heart away from this girl..I couldn't..
Loooking back at those days now.. My dilemma seems to be a funny predicament.. So thought I'd write about it!
To McMathew04,
I expect you to read what I've written not just because I've read what you've written, but also because my poem is worth it!
Written July 6th, 2006
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WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWwhhhhhhhhoa! Imagine... if you'd watched the show then you'd have loved it more than how much you love it now.. Oh my God.. you have an awesome sense of appreciation fairymother! You rock!
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Another great one, my friend! I haven't watched these shows, but I can still read the poetry and it evokes the picture and feelings it should, I am quite sure.
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Angel.. Oh yes girl! Inu Yasha is fucking oh so fucking awesomeeee! And you should watch more Inu Yasha.. good for your health
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Rock on! Thanks for the comment!
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Inuyasha is fucking awesome! I used to be like addicted to it let me think... it was probably two years ago... I watched every episode!! If I missed ONE my life was out of place, lol. those were the good old days, man... yeah, I still watch it every once in a while ya know? but not quite as much as I should, lol!
See ya later!
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Same problem here buddy! I don't get Cartoon Network too.. And yeah man.. we'll have our revenge on those who made Kagome so attractive and put me ( and you??) through so much misery.. Or should we??? ..Thanks for the inspiration! Awesome contest there!
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Wow, this was really good. Why did they have to go and make Kagome so attractive? lol Well, I enjoyed reading this. I used to watch Inuyasha all the time, but I don't have cartoon network anymore. I'm not sure if it even still comes on there or not. Good luck in the contest.
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beautiful
This is so great! Then again, I love all your work. I entered this contest to, like you said I should, it's called Sticotic. Or soemthing like that. But I hope you can check it out, although yours seems better.
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