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Cheza

Eyes so deep pink,
Glossy and innocent,
Depths of Wisdom, Pain,
And Love, they truly hold.

Nimble on your feet,
Dancing under the moon,
Graceful and ethereal,
In those eyes that you behold.

Singing songs for them,
Hige, Kiba, Tobo, Tsume
Blissful and Ignorant,
The sleep they fall into.

The Wolf inside Blue,
You brought to life,
Loyalty and love,
She swore to you, all her life.

Paradise you would lead to,
Darcia would steal you,
Bonds of love forged with Wolves,
To redeem you, die they would.

A life like no other,
So tender, so innocent,
To be loved by Humans
And Wolves alike.
Cheza, the flower girl.


Links to pictures of Cheza:

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Author notes

This song is about Cheza, supposedly a 13 year old girl, a flower maiden, from the Anime Series "Wolf's Rain"...

For those of you who unfamiliar with Wolf's Rain... Here's the deal..There are these four wolves..Hige, Kiba, Tobo and Tsume who embark on a search for paradise..They come across Cheza.. discover the age old emotional bond that was forged between the flower girl and the wolves.. Kiba falls in love with Cheza.. Dogs usually hunt the wolves..Cheza discovers the wolf inside a dog..A character named Blue.. Cheza is then kidnapped by Darcia, an evil noble.. The story moves on..describing how the wolves rescue Cheza ending with an answer to the question "Do they discover Paradise?"

PS: The Wolves can disguise themselves as Humans ! That's how the story goes!
Written July 6th, 2006

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  • theslayer
    August 9, 2006
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    I was thikin that I should quit writing so much in the Author's Comments... Boyyyyy you jus changed my mind! Glad you loved it! Thanks a ton for the comments! Rock On!

  • August 8, 2006
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    Wow!
    begins so sweet and innocently then i feel sad about the Wolf's rain then i feel to smile for the maiden and the ending is simply lovely. your poem really took me on a journey of many emotions and it is my pleasure to read such a well thought out and wonderfully written poem~
    lynn
    p.s. again, your author's comments are astounding to me~
  • theslayer
    July 17, 2006
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    Dear Fairymother of mine.... Trillions of thankses for the comment! Glad you liked it!

  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    July 17, 2006
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    Wow! Another intense poem! Wonderful!

    Love and hugs, Dumbkiwaniwinkidodo

    Kimberly G.
  • theslayer
    July 11, 2006
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    Heyyyyy!!! Do you know how good it feels everytime I read your comment??? That is why i IM you asking you to read my stuff! Glad you dropped by to read my stuff! And ryt... Cheza's so nice to look at! Thanks for the awesome comment! Love ya lots!
  • luvdrkchocolate
    July 10, 2006
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    Hi! It has been awhile, hasn't it? But I'm coming by to see what you are up to. And this is a whole lot different from what I saw of you before but I really like it! I have a friend that really loves anime too. I think she had me watch one of the shows of this. It was pretty good. But the flower girl was pretty strange. She was so nice to look at but she really was a plant! I like how you brought that out though and I think you made her sound just like she is. So good job! And good luck in the contest you entered!
  • theslayer
    July 9, 2006
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    That is so sweet! Thanks for the awesome comment! Glad you liked it!

  • Rose Darkest Night
    July 9, 2006
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    beautifly awsome

    ooo! i love it bro! it so great. althought the end of Wolf's rain was freaken sad, I loved this poem! although cheza was a flower maiden, the end the flower girl thing was cool. I loved this!
    Edited on Jul 09, 4:16 p.m. because 'mystake, dumb keyboard'.
  • MinaMunoko
    July 6, 2006
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    I'm not that farmiliar with this anime so thanks for explaining it a little. I loved the poem. You did a great job and good luck in my contest!
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