Scars
Reminding always
Never forgetting
What did I do to deserve this
Scars
Forever there
Never fading
Staining the memories on my body
Scars
Totally embarrassed
Totally ashamed
And yet not self-inflicted
Scars...
A part of a disease that I should not have
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Written July 7th, 2006
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Shit, this was really awesome. Totally got in to the poem in the first stanza, well done matey!
I hope you're ok!
Mon -
*hugs* Im sad because you are sad my friend. I hope you are ok now. And remember when you ever need someone to talk to - im always here... just confiscate my VW and all my attention will be focussed All scars inside and out fade in time.
Love and hippie hugs,
Joey -
Hmm.. a part of a disease that noone should have to suffer. Its such a western disease too. We're so weak and infantile. If only they opened their eyes...
Confusicus -
Very deep. I liked the way you explained the feelings. Good write, keep up the good job.
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hi my dear sister
What's going on here again?
I missed you my dear.
Please don't feel like this, ok?
Love you
Shahrzad
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excellent
Wow what a deep and dark write and yet so sad too. The flow was wonderful and the message was great. I feel so bad for you, I hope that you are better now. This poem was truly and excellent write and from the heart and soul
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