In this isolation
the world seems like a dream
I am but alone
Silenced are my screams
When I cry
I shed no tears
Smile when I hurt
And bleed away my fears
Cut me open
Then you would find
The emptiness within my soul
My entire life defined
Author notes
Written July 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- †Emotions!† by OurxBeginning.
303 points, ended July 11, 2006, 42 entries
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very good i love the emotion great write
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This is very different and I enjoyed reading it. It's short but the emotion is evident and powerful. Thanks for entering and good luck.
~Midnight~
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This ives me images of someone going kind of crazy, trying to understand why something beautiful, is. That 'cold beauty,' you understand? A little short, but provocative. 8/10.
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