love is not for to pople to look at eachother but in the same direction
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Written July 10th, 2006
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heartfelt.simple.its really great.... for a bumper sticker.. please put some heart into your work.. i belive it would make u a great poet.
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Good job as i said you can email your poems to me at punkrockishpoet@yahoo.com and I will edit them for you and I will send them back to you so they look good when you post.
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Interesting one-liner. I will keep its message into consideration. You have a few typos and misspellings. “to pople to look at eachother” corrected looks like: two people to look at each other. Anyway, good one-liner. It makes a bit of sense if one thinks about the quote and its meaning. It seems like it came from your heart.
- Andi
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