Look into the eyes of the divine
Shining with infinate and ultimate love
Cross my heart
I hope to die in your love
My God, My Christ
Sing to the heart of the universe
Christ the son of the Father
Cross my soul
I hope to live in your eternity
My God, My Christ
Dream in the arms of the saviour
Holding you in perfect light
Cross my love
I hope to be held in your heaven
My God, My Christ
Remember an eternal sacrifice
And wonder at his tears
Cross my heart
I hope to make it up to him somehow
The saviour of all
Author notes
Written July 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- God's Love and Grace (contest) by melphleg.
300 points, ended July 17, 2006, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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The poem itself is very good. It seems a love poem to a savior written with the passion and admiration of a lover to the beloved.
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Splendid piece indeed! A fine testament to your faith!
Blessings
Frog -
Great Lyrics
This is a wonderful vow to our Lord and Saviour to believe, trust and obey, reflecting at the same time on the reward it will bring. I did notice one typo: "Shining with infinate and ultimate love" --infinate/infinite. Otherwise, this is well-written and sings just like lyrics to our Father and Son.
Love and hugs, B♥nnieQ
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Excellent
This is a very inspirational and very well written Poem, Shirl
. keep up the great work and best of luck to you in the contest.
Cheers
Terry
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