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Acrostic ~ TheDragonsVengeance

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T  ruth reveals the
h  eart's intentions ~ the capacity for
e  mpathy & the 
D  epths of devotion are
r  adiant in your eyes
a  s you seek to nurture
g  rowth in others you may touch ~
o  pening the Sanctuary is
n  ever easy, yet it is a source of
s  trength ~ Trust will enhance
V  isions of
e  legance & gallantry as you
n  ear your Dream's waking
g  asp. Hold your head high &
e  nter these gates with pride &
a  we ~ you will
n  otice the inevitable
c  hanges in the music as you
e  mbrace the Dance...




             ~ July 10, 2006
                 10:50 p.m.




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Picture courtesy of Theater Of Dreams


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Written July 10th, 2006

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    February 2

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    True reveals many things for sure and this is divine. The ending is top notch as well. "Radiant is your yes as you seek to nuture" How gorgeous that is. I am so glad I found you


  • Night Hope gold member
    July 11, 2006
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    Well, Frankie, I'd have to say you're long overdue, then...It always amazes me that Poets rarely have poems written for them...we're the first ones to appreciate them, knowing what they require...I'm pleased you liked it so much...Of course it's alright to put on your page; 'tis yours to do with as you will...As far as my alleged Beauty... I often say that has not yet become necessary to put a pork chop around my neck to get the dog to play with me. I'm glad you enjoyed it...& you're most welcome, Poet... Wanda

  • TheDragonsVengeance
    July 11, 2006
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    Wow...

    Oh my Goddess... This brought tears to my eyes. I can't say that anyone has ever written such a beautiful poem for me. This has touched me and uplifted me in many ways, I'm so grateful. I can't express to you how this has made me feel right now, I'm speechless, and that doesn't happen very often. Thank you so very much, Wanda. And just so you know my name is Frankie, and feel free to use it. :-p Simply amazing, I shall have to put this on my authors page, if that's ok with you. Thank you again, you are truly beautiful in my eyes, whether I've seen you or not. Blessed Be... Thank you again.

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 11, 2006
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    I love Garth, of course; he lives near here, you know...Had we moved to Yukon in 1973, I'd have been at the same school as he was...I love many of his songs, but "The Dance" & "If Tomorrow Never Comes" hold incredibly personal meanings for me, Rich...I have the tape of his concert in Central Park, with Billy Joel & Don McLean as guests, & with Trisha Yearwood on backup...It's amazing...as are you, my Friend...Thank you for your lovely words, Scribe... Wanda

  • kaibab silver member
    July 11, 2006
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    Garth Brooks didn't say it any better in one of my favorite songs of his...to embarce life is the baptism of every poets...the fire on the inevitable burning mountain...great job Wanda

  • Theater Of Dreams
    July 11, 2006
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    You are welcome.

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 11, 2006
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    Thank you for coming by, for the use of such a great picture & for your always kind comments, James...I'm pleased you enjoyed it, my Friend...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 11, 2006
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    Thank you for reading & for your kind comments, Terry...I'm pleased you enjoyed it...I hope you write another one soon...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Theater Of Dreams
    July 11, 2006
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    Lovely and powerful.

    Just about all the stuff I live for, eh- Wanda? It's lovely- I really like the pic on the background of elegance.

    It's a superb Acrostic, I hope the one it's for will be impressed. I am certain in fact.

    Thanks for sharing.

  • July 11, 2006
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    Excellent

    Wow, this is a very good and well written Acrostic, night hope . Still haven't attempted another Acrostic, but will try it again soon. Keep up the great work

  • Night Hope gold member
    July 11, 2006
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    Not much, 'xcept that it's the Poet's name that I wrote it for... I dunno; it just brought chivalry to mind...knights, jousting, fair maidens, etc. ~ I'm glad you liked it, Serenahind...Thanks for comin' by...Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Lady Altheia
    July 11, 2006
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    Very cool poem. I likje the picture. I am not sure what the poem has to do with dragon's vengence. I thought your words were elegant.
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