So I wait for you call
My emotions scrambled up
So let me hear you voice of reasoning.....oh, please.
I see you walking with you friends
I wish I could hold you again
So please shoot me now
Silver bullet flying though my heart
oh oh please
I'm dying on the bathroom floor
I wait for you
So tell me you love me one more time
oh oh please.
If I cloud tell you one more thing
I would say...I would say
Sorry, my heart feels this way.
My love with never end for you
oh oh please
Tell me you love me one more time
I need to hear your voice of reasoning
oh oh please
I wish that I could hold you again
So please shoot me now
I'm waiting for you call
My emotion scrambled up
So tell me you love me more time
oh oh please
(I would like to buy a 9mm pistol please)
So tell me you love me more time
oh oh please
(I would like to pay in cash sir)
So tell me you love me one more time
oh oh please.
( OH MY GOD, he shot himself. Why *crying* ...why would he do this.....I LOVE HIM)
Author notes
Just tell me what you think
Written July 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Anything Your Heart Desires by VampyricNyteMare.
500 points, ended August 7, 2006, 43 entries
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Comments
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That sounds like what alot of people go through no matter what anybody says everyone feels like this once in their life. Some feel it more than that. I like this it's a really good write. Keep up the good work.
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whoa, I've taken this piece two ways. and both ways I've taken it are great. this would make for a great song ya know? I like it a lot actually. You've done a wonderful job seriously. OH! and before i forget (because i tend to do that A LOT) thank you for takin time to enter my contest
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