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When Will You Get On Your Knee

You know we have been together for almost three years now,
We have a beautiful daughter who looks just like her daddy
You say that you love me and you want me forever
Well then show me and ask me that special question

You say that we are going to be together till the end,
Well doesn't that mean someone gets down on there knee
I don't understand if i am your love, and you are my love
Why Aren't we Married in love?

When are you going to get on your knee
And pop the question "Will you Marry Me"?
I love you now and always will
Through thick and thin i will be your girl!

I love you and want you to know that you are the one i want to marry
and grow old together, watch our children grow up!! 22

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Written July 13th, 2006

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  • TwiztedAndAlone
    October 18, 2006
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    Yay sweety! I love this! I hope you two get married soon! I cant wait to see ya walk down the isle in a pretty dress all happy!!! You're my favorite person and I hope that you're doing okay since we never talk or see eachother anymore! This is a great poem babe!

    Sara

  • AmBrO
    July 18, 2006
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    Yes, we have already talked about marriage, we both just want to make sure we are ready, (Which ive been for a while)..hehe..but yeah...i love him and he says he loves me so thats all that matters, married or not, Thank you soo much for the sweet words though Auntie, they are apperciated!!! It means alot to me!! Thank you again, Talk to ya later!! MuchLove

    Your AP Niece
    ~Amber~

  • -Ink Artist-
    July 18, 2006
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    Fabulous!!!

    Awww hunny, this is a fabulous piece!! You really put your heart into this and it shows. Sometimes I think that men don't understand how important it can be for a woman to be proposed to, to be married, to have that unbreakable bond. They tend to think, well, I love her and she loves me so what do we need a piece of paper and some rings for!! But if marriage is what you really want then tell him. You seem to have a great relationship so taking it to the next step would just continue to show that your love is growing. Great job on this write hunny, your Auntie is proud of ya!! Take Care darlin!!

    ~*Lori*~

  • AmBrO
    July 17, 2006
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    Thank you soo much For the wonderful and sweet words!!! I am just in love with this man!! hehe...i like to talk about it, and plus he knows im just kidding when i talk about marriage right now, we both agreed if we were together for more then 5 years then we will get married!!! I dont disagree with it, cause married or not right now, we are in love and thats all that matters!! Thank you again though for the kind words!! I apperciate it!! MuchLove

    ~Amber~

  • tawk gold member
    July 17, 2006
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    amazing

    I love this write, and all the emotions that are running throughout it. The flow was excellent just an amazing job

  • AmBrO
    July 13, 2006
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    'Thank you very much, and i was just getting ready to write you and tell you i am sorry i didnt write LOVE in the author page, i wrote a long thing in it, but my little girl keeps playing on the keyboard!!! I didnt mean to not put it there, Thanks again though!! MuchLove

  • AmBrO
    July 13, 2006
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    Thank you very much, and i was just getting ready to write you and tell you i am sorry i didnt write LOVE in the author page, i wrote a long thing in it, but my little girl keeps playing on the keyboard!!! I didnt mean to not put it there, Thanks again though!! MuchLove

    Amber

  • BeautifulBirdie
    July 13, 2006
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    Man I'd be telling him to get down and propose lol No I'm just kidding. Maybe he is waiting on the perfect time. Your poem was very cute and I wish you luck in my contest.
  • Shainas man
    July 13, 2006
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    this is a good poem shaina is waiting on that same question good luck in contest
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