Mirror Mirror on the wall
Who is the greatest of them all?
Certainly not you little one
With everything you've said and done
What have I done? What have I said?
Except of course wish I was dead
Exactly that in which you speak
Your mind has become ever so weak
So what if I can't change back now!
And if you think I can, tell me, how?
I can't tell you how to live your life
But please don't end it with a knife
I would never, ever do that to me
And if I did, only to set me free
Whatever you say.. But whatever you do
Just remember people do love you
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Written July 14th, 2006
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This is sooo much better than mine. lol I was gonna do something like this but got stuck for inspiration and just wrote a list of things I hate about myself instead! lol This is good em... love it.
PRODUCTION TOMORROW!
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This is beautiful Ems! Really good writing and so powerful. The ryhme used throughout makes is doubly good!
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Well done. I like it
A poem that is intriguing as it goes full circle for and against. Unique in that you are questioning yourself again but apparently from the other side. Very original -
this is so cool! *coughs* as if you could write that good *coughs* lol! haha i love it!
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excellent
People do love you always remember this. Excellent write so filled with emotion and sadness. Keep up the wonderful writing
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This was so awesome Em! Well done. it's cool how the poem was like "Mirror, Mirror" very creative!
Keep writing.
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This is great Em! I love it .. The message is great, and I agree with 'thehunted' ... Well done babe ... Hope you are well
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this is cute in a scary way. i like the messesge tho, the way i look at its its saying that no matter how badly you see yourself, theres always some who loves you. and that means that things are never really as bad as we 1st think they are.
Really lovely peice of work, thank you for sharing
TheHunted xx
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