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Tarmac

As i left my house.
i walked the long the tarmac road.
i wait, i watch. the tear stream down my face.

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well..
tarmac a half started love song.
i haven't the time. i will finish in the next few days.
Written July 18th, 2006

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  • HeartbrokenVampire
    January 3, 2007
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    newy applauds you!


  • Allan Emery silver member
    September 24, 2006
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    Good start

    I came, I saw, I said hmmmm. I know it's not Ceaser, but it's good enough for here.

  • immortal-rose
    July 20, 2006
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    I love that you took my advice and wrote a poem with Tarmac in it after we were talking about awesome words

    this makes you one of my favorite people in the world right now

    and it's very nice. You rose to the challenge and did great, I agree it doesn;t need to be added to.

  • ILUVuBUTuDONTluvME
    July 18, 2006
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    Jesus said "if u deny me in front of ur frien

    it doesnt need 2 be fixed. its perfect and short and to the point! its awesome!!