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Been Waiting For You

i'll wait and wait for you
until you want me to
i dont know how to make you see the way i feel
i am so confused and all you seem to do is confuse me more
if i went up to you and ask you how you feel
would you luv me to, and feel the way i feel
i spent my whole life tryin to find someone like you
and now i have found you i anit letting go!


Author notes

short and simple always does the trick i think
Written July 19th, 2006

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  • jacieluves 20you
    April 6, 2007
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    lynnkte

    wow i feel you i can relate to you and that is a very good thing to or is it lol
  • acytra gold member
    January 12, 2007

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    I love it!

    I just read your author page. You seem a whole lot older than 15. Your writes are full of emotion and imagery. You have a great talent! I love the style you have!

  • Tear-Stained-Heart
    August 3, 2006
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    ace write. like it loads. "love is like sand, hold it too slack and it will slip through your fingers but hold it to tight and it will gush through the gaps" keep writing
    XX Tear XX

  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    July 23, 2006
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    i spent my whole life tryin to find someone like you
    and now i have found you i anit letting go!

    Truely words are very true and so loving as well..so sentimentall journey of the muse here..


  • xxemokevinxx
    July 22, 2006
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    This was good n' short, I really liked it a lot. I thought it was really cute and just so sweet to read, good job.

  • Celticmoon gold member
    July 22, 2006
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    Short and sweet is sometimes better. Not everytime must we be long winded to make a point especially when it is of love. Love can be the easiest and the hardest emotion to express some times. But if you allow your heart to open as you have here then it becomes all that much easier. Well Done!
  • HoldMe
    July 21, 2006
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    short and simple is the best way to write things like this...i like it a lot, because you're just saying how you feel and that's cool

  • FreeSpiritedSoul
    July 20, 2006
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    thx huni glad you liked it and i read you latest poem it rele upset me to hear that you were inhappy
    luv ya
    xxxFreeSpiritedSoulxxx

  • Shadow Rule
    July 20, 2006
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    Hay Stefy, this poem does rock and yes short and simple did do the trick here ^_^ great job.

    xx Shadow xx

  • FreeSpiritedSoul
    July 20, 2006
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    oh thz hun i will chang that now lol

  • sunshinegirl silver member
    July 20, 2006
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    I get to leave the first comment! Yay! I love it, but i have to say you have one little typo in it, line five, 'wet' should be 'went' but other than that this is really good! Love it.
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