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Poet's Doubt !




To see his smile, she bloomed with love
Or
To see her blossom, he shines from above ?






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Written July 20th, 2006

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  • perdisbeaute
    July 20, 2006
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    How sweet and charming!

  • MissStranger
    July 20, 2006
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    Very original! Mind-twisting actually! That second line has a huge effect! Good luck!

  • LionessK Greeters member
    July 20, 2006
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    loveliness, as always..
    best to you in the contest ♥

  • Gypsy Butterfly gold member
    July 20, 2006
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    This is an extremely clever and very poetic write, a lovely touch of spiritual love, so delicate and lovely. Thank you for this first entry and I look forward to your second one. Good luck in my contest... x LB