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Lustful Dreaming




With sinful touching
These urges awaken
Your caresses clutching
My senses shaken

A yearning dwelling
With burning desire
My hunger swelling
You stirred up fire

This intense aching
With pleasures moaning
Our bodies quaking
Explicit groaning

Our passions flaring
Emotions screaming
The moments sharing
Is lustful dreaming

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Written July 20th, 2006

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  • faderman1959
    July 5, 2007

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    Excellent poem! You captured the passion of the moment perfectly! I had to slow myself down from reading to fast!


  • July 30, 2006
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    Wow!
    a most sensual poem very tastefully written with such deep emotions and vivid imagery your words are mesmerizing and again, showcase your amazing writing abilities. the picture is stunning and so well suited to your poem this is just a joy to read~
    a beautiful poem~
    lynn

  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    July 22, 2006
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    Well, I see you have naughty rhymes starting to fill your page! So nice to see your talents and interests expanding beyond our... uh hum... adventures...

  • mzblondemoments
    July 21, 2006
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    Thanks Lori I am pleased you liked it.

    Thanks for the comments and applause. I hope all is well with you.



    ~much love~
    carol

  • -Ink Artist-
    July 21, 2006
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    Amazing piece sis!! You bring alot of emotion to this in few words. Titillating and yet very tasteful. Loved it!! Great job!!

    ~*Lori*~
    Edited on Jul 21, 8:49 because 'typo'.

  • mzblondemoments
    July 20, 2006
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    Thanks Kimberly for the comments and applause

    ~much love~
    carol

  • mzblondemoments
    July 20, 2006
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    As for me too
    I never got my share
    This was just a dream
    I had {not fair}

    It seems that it’s
    never my day
    so I go to sleep
    and romp in the hay

    Hopefully I’ll have
    another dream tonight
    and it will be an
    additional delight

    I am happy that a
    Thrill to you it gave
    Because in my dreams
    I really misbehave

    Thanks Polly
    Luv ya ♥



    ~muchlove~
    carol

  • Pollycheck silver member
    July 20, 2006
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    my heart went
    all a flutter
    when reading this poem
    with my mind in the gutter

    it got me
    all hot
    looked for my
    wife's g-spot

    she said
    go away
    it wasn't
    my day

    so to sleep
    i will go
    for no love
    she'd bestow

    the wimper
    you hear
    is from me
    my dear

    it just
    isn't fair
    we should all
    get our share

    so carol
    rubs it in
    for i just
    can't win

    the only thing
    that i get tonight
    is to read your poem
    and think about my plight

    but at least
    from your quill
    you gave me
    a thrill

    so in ending
    i'll say
    that you did
    make my day

    great poem carol
    love polly
    Edited on Jul 20, 9:45 p.m. because 'typo'.

  • Fairy Nutty Buddy silver member
    July 20, 2006
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    Woohoo! Go Carol, Go Carol! Nicely done, my friend.

    Love and hugs,

    Kimberly G.

  • mzblondemoments
    July 20, 2006
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    Thank you, sunshineandjello, for your comments and applause. It is very much appreciated.



    ~much love~
    carol

  • Melba Solis-Z
    July 20, 2006
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    This is very good. Tastefully done.
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