on my way to dreamland, to sleep,
i lay in a small bed staring at the pale yellow walls
of my haven,
and listen to the rhythmic pattering
on the roof, on the countless leaves
hear cool water caressing the tree branches
faster, louder,
as my breathing slows, quiets
the rain falls
along with my eyelids
my lullaby
in this perfect place
Author notes
Written July 24th, 2006
A contest entry
- Tell Me What the Rain Did! by Melodies.
300 points, ended July 26, 2006, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nothing like a soft gentle rain to put you to sleep. Nice job!!
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Aww thank you!!! ^^
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A sweet rain poem that could be a lullaby! So dear and lovely!
you get that hug for writing so well! And a 
to enjoy the rain shower! 
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awww such a short & sweet write about the rain. such a great contest idea, i think i might enter. but of course, my entry wouldn't be as good as yours...great write <3
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