The lights after the movie, slowly come on
During the credits and Rob Zombie song
Seats empty, except for two
They wait silently, till the screams are through
First time meeting, they set this date
A getting to know each other, to further relate
They only talked online, words to the screen
He appeared unaware of his new surroundings
In foreign territory, his friend's domain
The neighborhood looked somewhat the same
yet there seemed to be an uncomfortable feeling
When he embraced her flesh, upon eyes meeting
The plan to venture out and show him the sights
Visit some places, she spent many nights
Treat him so well, he won't ever want to leave
or he take her back with him, a plan up her sleeve
Money not needed, for she would pay his way
Another one of her incentives, for him to stay
He spent several hours unsure of his fate
but when she touched his warm flesh, made it to late
His nose bled profusely, out of the blue
She tried not to panic, for she already knew
It did not coagulate like it used to in the past
Just how she wanted it, make the flow last
Sharp stomach cramps, punched him so hard
When he first set foot on her front yard
The breeze stopped moving before he realized
Under his eyelid, a maggot box fly
Body itching , open sores from scratching
from sitting in her car, he assumed from laughing
Blood rising to the surface of his flushed skin
All those tales she spoke of, started happening
Strands of fine hair, floated to the floor
She wanted him bald, and attractive, no more
Tired of sharing her friend with the others
and sick of pretending, to be less than just lovers
His face suddenly distorted from one mild stroke
The spell worked beautifully, she did as a joke
Droplets of crimson, trailed from each orifice
With a smirk on her face, his cheek she did kiss
She promised to heal him, so he would feel well
Bones ached from the snap, she forgot to tell
The springs from the mattress, uncoiled on their own
and imbedded in his back, splitting with each moan
The Box he opened earlier, stood in front of his face
She leaned over with curiosity, and he sampled her mace
His eyes glazed over, his pupils dilated
Ignited the fuse, she felt ignored and violated
Out of courtesy, she wanted to know
If any of his compliments are just for show
As a gracious host, she asked if he felt better
She wanted to read out loud, her Dear John letters
Author notes
Only for the contest!
**Dear John Letter: A parting in words written to paper which normally denotes a breakup of some sort...
Usually a woman writes to a man telling him the grave news but in this case...The woman has received *many* from men who were not interested in her *obsessive* affections.
This write inspired from many things...
Does not mean I condone revenge or violence!
Did in story type format...
Tenses done with intent...
Written July 24th, 2006
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I've read this over a couple of times and I really don't understand what is going on in the poem. I understand from your author's comments it may be about revenge.
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This is an awesome piece and the rhyming is great. Thanks for entering this poem and good luck in the contest.
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Great and dark gory write. Wonderful writing. Thank you for entering. Good luck. James and Jeannie
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OMG!!! I got serious ducky bumps here lady.. shew..
you are so good at being bad darling hahaha..
rubbing arms cause now I got the willies
LOL I miss your group I had fun in there. but if I write about the things that go bump in the night at least in my life, I am liable to scar people for life..
Take Care Beautiful One,
Catressa
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I like the suspence and tension you built from the
start keeping the reader guessing what will happen
next..Interestingly written and you left the end to
the reader's imagination..well done.
Good luck in the contest..take care.
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