with you,
i am completely myself.
with you,
i have no fear of rejection.
with you,
my eyes cloud with love.
with you,
the water doesn't scare me.
with you,
NOTHING scares me.
with you,
i look at the world differently.
with you,
i live.
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Written July 27th, 2006
A contest entry
- enter this contest. or lose your wallet. by MagicaI.
300 points, ended August 6, 2006, 10 entries
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awwww it's not bad. (not the best you've ever written, but let's not concentrate on that) like the repeated phrase "with you" like the title. and "with you, NOTHING scares me". like you feel safe and secure with him. i think i know the him you're talking about! ^__^ great write <3
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