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Life?

As I sit here and look back on my life
I wish I could go into the past and change things
But you cant so you have to take life
As it comes at you
Live with the mistakes you made
Never regret things you do
Just remember if its not something you liked
To never do it again
To regret is to not live
Live your life as if it was the last day
Sing like everyone is listening
And singing a long with you
Dance like everyone wants to
But is to afraid to
Dance in his arms like NOTHING else matters
Don’t let people tell
How to live your life
Just remember to have fun
I know I’ve made mistakes
But I know you have made them too
I live with what I’ve done
And find the best in things
For if you don’t you tend
To live in the past
Fretting and regretting things
That cannot be changed
Things that were in your destiny to do
Everything happens for a reason
Destiny has its own plan
As does life fate and death
But in the end everything works out
If you don’t give up
Keep going get the next morning
It’s a brand new day
Start over like yesterday was
Just a figment of your imagination…

Author notes

So this is like the first thing I wrote in quite awhile I had MAJOR writers block
Written July 27th, 2006

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  • blondone silver member
    July 28, 2006
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    welll written poem you have her you are over that writers block this poem is filled with all the right emotions and you speak the truth great job done...

  • robert bolin
    July 28, 2006
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    I agree the emotion and the passion of this amazing poem is something that everyone should learn to see and not just look at
    They should live life as if today is there last and make it scream on the way out the door, Thank you for allowing me to read and comment on your work..

  • Timeless Wisdom gold member
    July 28, 2006
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    Great

    Very Well Written... I loved your style. Now this particular poem... was it dedicated to anyone... there was alot of emotion... alot of passion... and You definately hit the ball park of inspiration. Nicely Done.

    My Rating : 50/50 My Verdict : Great