I hang my heart where i lay my head
Forboding words that are always said
When you're not around
They fall before the compromise
I hadn't noticed through my mind's eyes
Until now
And whenever i see any hope from this
It looks like rain
I'm at the end of all this
I can't wait for you to come around
And even though you dig your own grave
You can't deny what i have found
Belated lies among us
In that moment the silence tells all
Where do we go from here?
I break so well it fits the mold
Of every guy you've ever loved and then sold
I'd call you a harpy if such a word was ever true
And whenever i see any hope from this
It looks like rain
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Written July 27th, 2006
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you really are an amazing writer that was such a powerful deep beautiful aspiring piece I am like babbling I'm so speechless lol awesome work
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wow i love philosophical stuff, i took the subject last year and found im a natural! Naruto in American is crewed up but there isnt much American dubbing that isnt! stick wit de Jap version
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Thank you. Demonethes was actually a Greek Scholar and Philosopher.
I like Naruto also. Although i was disappointed with the english version.
Edited on Jul 28, 11:37 because ''. -
Bares the soul of a scribe
21 years of unrequetted love brought my eyes to see this and my heart to feel such pain. It takes my soul for a walk..... -
this is quite a nice poem, btw i like ur username too, theres no shortage of demons on this site eh? I really cant say much as the character Jiraiya (from the amime/manga series Naruto)is a powerful albeit pervy toad hermit!
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