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Wings of darkness, a symbol of despair.
Memories of life past, sparking regret.
Knew not the path I took, for addled it was,
My mind.
To soar high in the sky, was my wish immortal,
Prices I paid, with no second thought, for
A hindrance to me you were but,
My beau.
A flower is my throne, decievingly comfortable,
For the stalk is but a shadow, lifeless and false.
Colour deprived butterflies, are but images of,
My thoughts.
A pink mist surrounds me, is it undying love?
Orbs of light still glimmer, faintly though.
Darkness shall be my end, if you won't come for me,
My Love.
Come only if our love was true, for still
Unsure I'am that I deserve a new life. Love you.
Author notes
Picture 3
For those girls, who find their true love in their tender ages, but later ditch them just so that they can get a better life, a career, joining the rat race only to discover that true love is something that is above all kinds of professional achievement. This poem would apply to guys as well.. but had to use the feminine gender because of the pretty pink/black fairy in the picture.
The pink in the picture represents the love. The black represents all the false hope, the deciet and every other falsehood related with an awesome professional life. The girl is now at the best of her career( sitting on a throne of flowers, feeling like a Queen), but she knows it could all come down to earth some day because it was built on falsehood.
Her wings are signs of her achievement, but also of despair.
The butterflies in the picture are her thoughts, which were colourful before this life, but are now deprived of colour, as her thoughts are now deprived of happiness.
My love to Kimberly G, my nutty fairymother who so rightly suggested that I'd be able to write something good for this contest. allpoetry.com/poets/Fairy%20Nutty%20Buddy
Written July 30th, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- So Many Pictures! So Many Poems! by neoladyem.
400 points, ended July 31, 2006, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Lynn!!! three 'Wow!'s??? That is so encouraging! Thanks for em! Love your comment! Glad you liked the ending! And again.. about the Author's comments.. you were the only one who read it thru and took time to appreciate it.. Whhhhoa! You ROCK! Thanks for everything again!
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Wow! Wow! Wow!
i clicked on the picture first and then to read your beautiful words i enjoy the realism feel to your poem as it is very cleverly written. you could have easily written "fluff" but i find your words to be fascinating and i especially like how you end on such a lovely note of hope. made me smile~
love it~
lynn
p.s. your author's comments are truly a poem unto itself~ -
hahaha... the second one was after you won the Gold, silly.
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Thanku Thanku! Love ya lots sis!
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You commented twice on my poem? Now how sweeter can you be??
.. Love ya fairymother! 
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Wow!!! Congratulations Bro...!!!!!!!
I knew u'd win..!
n u thot the poem wasn't good...! silly ricky!!
heheheh!
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Wonderful job on the Gold medal!! WAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I knew you could do it, Dumbkiwaniwinkydodo! A beautiful illustration of the lovely picture. Nutty Fairymother
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Fairymother! Thanks for the comment! And ya.. will definitely watch that movie 'The Notebook'.. thanks again for making me write for this contest! Love ya lots!
Dumbkiwaniwinkydodo! -
neoladyem! Thanks a ton for the awesome comment! Really encouraging... Thanks again..
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So romantical!
I love this line!
Darkness shall be my end, if you won't come for me,
My Love.
Great job, Dumbkiwaniwinkydodo! Beautiful!
Love and hugs,
Nutty Fairymother -
This is so romatic and beautiful. I can really tell which picture you used with out even looking at the authors comments. I really happy that it you inspired you to write something this wonderful. You did a great job.
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