All around the world I look for you
In my heart I never see
I try to fly with hope and desperation
My sister please come find me for I have lost myself in a cloud of darkness without you
Where are you my love, hope, and savior
My angel, pride, and joy
All around the world I search for you.
Author notes
It's to my little sister Destany, know I miss you a lot.
Written July 31st, 2006
A contest entry
- Commenting Community--form poetry by mamad.
300 points, ended September 20, 2006, 3 entries
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I could not find you on the membership of the groupu. Sorry.
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this was a beautiful dedication piece, short and sweet. i got a lot of different vibes from this, it could be a loved moved away, left and startted a new life or passed away. i got the passing away vibe the hardest. this was really heartfelt, without being corny. loved it.
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a touching piece...I hope you find what/who you are searching for. As for the poem, I enjoyed it, very heartfelt.
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And one day you will find her. Nice short easy read. Thanx for sharing it. I enjoyed myself.
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Where are you my love, hope, and savior
My angel, pride, and joy
All around the world I search for you.
The words from the soul here touching the readers soul as well..I just pray to the God that you and your sister will see each other again soon.
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This is really sad poem to write. It short and smiple. And at the same time clear as crystal light and full of love to show for your sibling. I up you and your sister will see each other again soon.
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very good
beautifull, i have two brothers i cannot find although i have found my * baby * brother after 43 years apart.. thank yo ufor sharing this with us and keep up the good work
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Beautiful poem sweetie. I do love this poem!
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