My journal waits for me
For the stroke of my pen
Longing for the smooth caress of my words
Unfolding one by one
I touch pen to paper and start to paint
And he drinks in the flow of my ink
As I spread across him
Like a tapestry woven with lust
As my pen slithers down the page
I feel the longing,
The rush of the first time
And I begin to write
Slow and deliberate,
Savoring the feeling
Of the smooth surface
Of his pale white skin
My thoughts naughty and nice
Fill his pages with passion
Till there is nothing left
And I return to my dreams
In the late hours of the night
My passions, desires, and needs
Spill out onto the empty pages
Waiting to be fulfilled
Like so many nights before
I come to him willing
And give in to his seduction
Author notes
Written August 10th, 2006
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I think written from a male perspective - pen however "the flow of my ink" implies an open well as does "spread across him". Giving your write male gender huh? Most call their works "her" or "she" traditionally but then, you're the author - your choice.
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Love this one Anna.
Great to see you writing again. 
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very good
Wow, what a poem, dear, this is great! So simple it is, I didnt look for a dictionary. I love the way u write, Keep this up. u are a wonderful write. I am edified with your use of imagery. Thank u
Good day. God loves u
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Thank Eddy! I always love hearing from you.
Anna -
Very nice indeed. A new way to look at an old subject...
Lucky journal
Hugs...Eddy
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PsychotikPoetI was very pleased how it turned out, I was not sure what to expect when I started writing.
Anna -
MrSaucyBanter Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to stop by read and comment.
Anna
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Head Witch, Thank you, it was an experiment and I think it turned out all right.
Anna -
I really liked this poem. You really captured the passion some poets feel when they write. Awesome job. Keep it up. I look forward to reading more by you.
love ,midnite rae
aka:marissa rae..[the morbid mistress]
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Personification at its very finest. I think this is a marvellous little poem. Well done ma'am.
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You know I could have never imagined that writing in a journal could be seen as such an erotic, sensual experience. I was completely impressed with how well thought and worded this was. Great job. Blessed Be and Merry Part.
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I like this. It's very teenagery. It kinda reminds me of myself a little bit. I think what I liked most about this is how real it is. It's not just a whole bunch of mumbo jumbo that doesn't make any sense, you know? It's real. And I like that! Keep up the good work.
AMANDA -
Great write - you've captured the feelings very well!
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