Anticipation of our predestination
Realization of the situation
Of the obligation
What’s the motivation?
Fascination, an expectation
Maybe a fixation on temptation
Speculation of our creation
In the end is it revelation
Or just a misinterpretation
Author notes
Just having some fun with rhyme
Written August 16th, 2006
What did you think
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wow so many big words! i read them just fine though lol. love the backround!
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Super
Maybe both my dear
I love your writing,you are so talented
I really commend you for this so enigmatic and so reviling poem
Thank you for searing it
Nick
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A "tion" rhymer huh Anna?
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I'll have to leave with contemplation
and maybe do some deliberation
Let's hope I don't get a fixation
and find there any abomination
Maybe with some concentration
I can void out conversation
and then I'll find the confirmation
and elimination of the desperation
Let's hope my mind has coagulation
and can attain high elevation
and during then that presentation
I'll arrive there at an observation
I leave now with some reservation
our time has come for termination
but you can be sure there was fascination
I be back soon with my application
Hugs...Eddy -
Quite The Imagination
I love this type of poetry where what the use of vocabulary is quite limited and has a wonderful message.
Excellent flotation by the way... looks like I have been saved. -
I love writes like this. I love to play on words also. Job well done my friend.
God's touch
Jeri -
This is great! You have done a beautiful job with this - the repitition works well - and the peice enve has a message - Good!
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Very well done..I have tried something similar to this but it was always so crazy and made no sense...this was good. BRAVO.
Great job
Soulful Woman -
Inspiration
Wow! a lot of things rhyme with Jason!
lol... that's awesome,
it all makes sense...
besides rhyming, it's really deep, I like it! -
very good
wow. That had to be exhausting to write!! But it was a pleasure to read, it flowed well, it is very very good. -
In the end is it revelation
Or just a misinterpretation
this is a wonderful creation
bringing a beautful sensation
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