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Together Forever

How could you,
See that it's fit,
To take what you said,
And shove it all in my face.
All of your words just hollow,
and all from grace.
Games that you played,
landed this lead deeper into my head.

I look down and see a reflection
cast by nothing - myself.
I just want you, to see what-
you lost, see what you threw away.

How could you,
See thats it's fit,
To take all the times,
That I held you late at night.
Every embrace just weakens,
but not from stregnth.
Because in the end,
it was you that lost it all.

It's not light, that's me laying there,
dead from a gunshot - myself
I just want you, to know that you did-
This, to know you hit the firing pin.

So now when you sleep,
You can look inside and find me,
eating you away, each and everyday.
I told you we would be together forever.

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Written August 18th, 2006

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  • ISheHer
    August 18, 2006
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    this is kind of sick, i really like it though. well written, the idea is good, the flows pretty good, and all that other shit....i really like this poem...