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Racial Peace

Live and let live
No matter what

Black or white
Live and let live

Lets forget prejudice
And aim instead
For an end to world unrest

Peace, Glorious peace
No matter what

Then
Heaven would be
a place on Earth.



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I wrote this before all the recent terrorist attacks,.... premonition maybe?
Written August 22nd, 2006

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  • moonmagic
    September 20, 2006
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    i really enjoyed it very simple and truthfull.. premonition, yeah could have been...

  • DolphinLass silver member
    September 20, 2006
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    thanks..i actually wrote this in 2000, long before the recent terrorist attacks and don't know what inspired it.
  • Arzab
    September 19, 2006
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    Wonderful write. This has a great message behind it. If only everyone could live life in harmony here on earth. I think religion and racial discrimination has not let people live in the world very peacefully. It has more or less destroyed a hope for a harmony kind of environment. Maybe if enough people believed in being kind to others in the world, things would change. Thanks for sharing this piece. It was nice to read.

  • PoetsAngel
    September 1, 2006
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    This is just beautiful. I wish the world could be just like this, thank-you for the pleasure of the read xx
  • Kyrie Eleison
    August 26, 2006
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    Good Job :)

    I really enjoyed this one, Its very simple but also extremely true. Overall I think this was a very good write.

  • DolphinLass silver member
    August 23, 2006
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    Thanks for nice comment on poem about peace and re myself and my son and my poetry. Nice to meet you

  • princesspaige
    August 23, 2006
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    That was a very good poem i love it... keep up the excellent work!!! um... i no Errant Panther he is my AP uncle he rocks... you and him are very good at poetry.... he was just telling me that you where new to the site welcome... my name is paige and im 12yrs old and im from Australia... I hope to read some more of your poems there really good!!!
    Talk to you soon from Paige xoxoxoxo
  • Mutterfly
    August 22, 2006
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    Good job

    Terrific and so apt with the world in such crisis at present. Words thatg need to be read and taken heed of.
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