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This is a remake of Into the Abyss

Watching, waiting
Alone with the thought of darkness in her mind
Slowly spiraling deeper
deeper into the abyss
She wants to go up
She prays the achohol will choke the dark
she tries to go towards the light
But she keeps going deeper
Into the abyss

Can she be pulled out now?
Did she catch herself in too deep this time?
She’s wondering now
Why she thought the drugs would help
Because now she’s caught in…
the flames of hell

Slowly sinking…
Hatred fills her every thought and word
She hates everything and everyone around her now..
She sits and spirals
With no thought of getting out…
The dark is finally taking over she can’t see the light
the tears start to roll…
thay are tears of acid… and now she’s going
Into the abyss

Can she be pulled out now?
Did she catch herself in too deep this time?
She’s wondering now
Why she thought the drugs would help
Because now she’s caught in…
the flames of hell


She is almost at rock bottom
She is now truly alone
No one cares that she is almost gone
she cries for someone to pull her out
And save her soul, but no one cares…
She dissapears now…

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Written August 22nd, 2006

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