Find the beauty inside her eyes
Masked by smiles of what she hides
Again, her life filled by the lies
And then she cries, and then she cries
One more day slowly going on
The hurt won't cease, it's never gone
Another move, she's just a pawn
Her soul withdrawn, her soul withdrawn
Reach deep inside, see hopes and dreams
Look past that flow of tearful streams
Free her from all the hellish screams
On bright moonbeams, on bright moonbeams
Find the beauty inside her eyes
Cut loose, the cords of her disguise
Renew the hope her heart denies
Before she dies, before she dies
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Hmmm, so trying this form thingy...
Written August 26th, 2006
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Thanks hun, always appreciate your comments.
Storm -
Thank you for the comment, much appreciated. I suck at form poetry. I suppose it's why I created my own form, mistakenly. But I have got to spread my poetic wings and fly a little.
Storm -
Deep!
This was so very deep sis. You did a wonderful job. Thanks for sharing hun.
Kari -
have no clue about any kind of form but i can see clearly that this is pure art!beautiful and depressing almost romantic and hopeful,very nice!
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