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And He Cries

Bad decisions cloud his youth
decisions that were not his to decide
He cries.


Momma's chest does not rise and fall
Papa drinks away it all
He cries.


Sister ran away
Leaving him behind
He cries.


The bottles build up
to be touched is feared
He cries.


Taken away
From all he knew
He does not know why
But He cries.


Change is a shock
Love not recognized
He cries.


He grows in a new home
Lovely girl of gold
He rubs his eyes


What is this feeling?
the butterfly feeling
He feels his cheeks dry


The bells, they ring
the angels they sing.
They have received their wings
He grins.


Belly rounded
She glows
He smiles.


Months pass
it is the day
the bud of a flower
a birth
He beams pride


A bouncing baby on his knee
a pitiful giggle of glee
And he cries
tears of joy






Author notes

I guess this is a story, in a poem obviously... that shows that love .. can really change a person. She this boy had a hard past... he always felt alone... he didn't know why he was here. Then he met this girl of gold... and she made things alittle bit brighter bit by bit... and crying doesn't always mean sadness
Written August 28th, 2006

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  • Cassandra Reign
    August 28, 2006
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    wow that was beautiful ^_^ I really am not sure what to say. I think its... hm...eh I'm stumped.