Bedroom eyes meet mine
And suddenly butterflies appear
Not Yellow, or Red, or Brown
A color indescribable.
Yet, a beauty of it's own.
Hugs that seem to last forever
To only be in your arms would be perfection.
Glances
Shared moments are forever
Within my heart a place for you
Eternity.
Light touches
Ignite me
Tame this fire inside
Don't let go
Hold me tight.
Pure animosity flowing within my veins.
Lips of pale red
If only I could get a taste
A blush Zinfandel
Addicted.
Hands touching hands
Body language just right
Glowing candles make the mood
Feverish whispers of love.
God, contain this feeling
Oh, but one more time make me feel this way
With just one look
Again.
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Sensual...
Written August 29th, 2006
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Hands touching hands
Body language just right
Glowing candles make the mood
Feverish whispers of love.
This is definately my favorite stanza of your poem.
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Very sensual, like it! Your words are interesting the way they melt together. Very well done, and good luck!
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